My Top 5 Poem’s :)
Here are 5 of my poems I made at school well that my class had to do it was fun I can’t say what on is the best out my friends liked them.
Gum On my shoe
Walking down the road and
All I hear is
Squish, Squish, Squish
I look at my shoe
And I see gum on my shoe
Ew, ew, ew
The Bee Who Liked Tea
There once was a bee who like tea
Who said “when I drink me tea I feel free”
But then some bears
With no hairs
Came and toke all my tea
The Happy Girl
There once was girl who was very happy
Nothing could make her feel crappy
Then one day
In May
She went to a dance, after she needed a nappy
This was about … the one the only Kayli 
Why
Why would you ask me
And then tell me now your free
You said you don’t really want to be here
You were just trying to make me fear
Not really loving me just saying
That you do well I don’t need you so get going
Stay Here
Don’t move away from me
Stay here with all you friends
You need the people who see
Who you really are the ones who call you bends
This one was made for… Marsadie aka Bends
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clustrmap
April 28th, 2011 at 12:11 pm
These are really great poems, I really like the one titled. “Why.” That poem really describes relationships. It really makes sense if you have been in that position before. Yes, I have been there many many times. It takes a lot of courage to write a poem like that describing how it feels. It is short and simple, but it goes deep! I give credit to the writer of that poem!
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haleyjo1.edublogs.org
May 10th, 2011 at 9:32 am
Thank-you im happy to know that you like my poems the one about the WHY is one on the ones that really happened to me I love it and it was mad for anyone who really need it very happy to know that you liked it and it made you happy i think im going to try to make more if you like you can come look that them too and tell me how you feel
~Brooke~
ps. ya i will have to go see your blog like now